I've decided that, two days into my "paid criticism" effort, I could go down to Rob's Word Shop on Tuesday and buy three sentences from him. With about 10 words per sentence, this would cost me $30. That's a lot of money to buy three sentences of constructive criticism. Do people who write blogs even read many blogs? My birthday is coming up. Maybe someone could go to Rob and buy 30 words from him for my birthday. Here's the link to Rob's Word Shop, open for only one more week. Good luck, Rob! Good luck, little poem!